Mom’s Helper
- Braylee J.
- Dec 18, 2024
- 2 min read
Updated: Feb 27
Sometimes, I like to remind people just how smart I am. They don’t always give me enough credit, but trust me, I notice everything.
Today, I was at Mom and Dad’s house. It was Christmas time—my favorite time of year! I love everything about it: the music, going on car rides, seeing my family, eating Mom’s home-cooked meals (blended, of course), and opening my new socks and toys! However, today, the house felt a little different. I could sense that Mom was stressed. Dad must have forgotten to do something. Maybe we are having company. I wasn’t really sure, but she was rushing around the kitchen, and cleaning up with a look that said, “Don’t test me right now, Danielle.”
Normally, I keep to myself when grown-ups are busy (unless it's time for a meal- that's a different story). I’ll sit nearby, pretending to play with my toys, and no one asks me to help with chores, which is fine by me but today, I felt bad for Mom. I thought, I don’t have much on my schedule today… maybe I can help her out. No one had to ask me. I made up my mind all on my own and when I decide to do something, there’s no stopping me.
First, I marched over to the cabinet under the sink to grab the dish soap. That’s where Mom and Lovia both keep it—I’ve seen them do it a million times. Then, I grabbed the sink stopper and popped it right into the drain, like I was solving one of my favorite puzzles. It’s just like fitting the giraffe piece into my animal puzzle: easy for someone as smart as me. When I turned around, Mom was watching me. She looked so surprised, her mouth was open like she couldn’t believe what she was seeing. I acted casual, but I love when people are impressed with me. I had work to do! I turned on the water faucet, squeezed in a lot of soap (at this point, all I wanted was a bath but I had to stay focused), and let the sink fill up. Next, I started to load in the dirty dishes.
I could feel Mom’s eyes on me the entire time, so I made sure to do it right. I started with the forks and spoons, because Mom says you always do the silverware first. I wasn’t about to mess this up. “Danielle, look at you!” Mom said, her voice all bright and happy. “You’re doing such a good job!”
Now, if you know me, you know I love compliments. They’re my favorite thing in the whole world, right up there with boat rides and ice cream. Hearing Mom say I was doing a good job made me feel like the smartest, most special person in the world!


That’s a beautiful and heartfelt journal entry! I love how it captures Danielle’s personality, intelligence, and keen sense of observation. The way she takes pride in her actions and enjoys being helpful, especially with Char :-).
I also really appreciate how your writing gives us insight into Danielle’s thoughts—it’s engaging and full of Sissy's personality and its spot on, with just the right amount of humor that Sissy showed us. The part about fitting the sink stopper like a puzzle piece was such a great comparison! It really emphasizes how capable and determined she is.
And, of course, the connection with Char is so special. The way Danielle was always near her, whether swinging outside or just being close, really…